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Your voice drops
and shatters on the floor
like the stack of plates
I couldn't hold onto
anymore.

You left the room
and I was still standing in it,
shards of anger and porcelain buried in
the carpet and my skin.
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LadyBrookeCelebwen Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, I like the second stanza a lot. :)
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vespera Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
*sigh*
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Echolalic-Ellie Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
That first stanza rhymes beautifully. You lost me a bit during the second because I expected another rhyme, which I didn't find. :saddummy:
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