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I woke up this morning
and found that I had known
the word for you all along,

that I had known
that your
name,
your lips,
your hands searching
for my hands;

they could only ever
have been called

home.
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ChocoCoatedLemons Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2013
Adore this - so simple but so perfectly executed. The single last word, especially not using a capital letter on it, was really effective.
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cality Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
So beautiful and tender. :heart:
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toxic-nebulae Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2013  Student Writer
lovely, but I'd change the comma after "hands" to a period or semi-colon to avoid a comma splice.
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jodeanna Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2013
Oh, this hits home tonight.
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shiny-kiyoko Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
really really wonderful !!!! wow
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DrippingWords Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2013  Student Writer
This is wonderful.
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disrhythmic Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013
Gorgeous. :heart:
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haphazardmelody Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is fantastic. It reminds me of my husband. :heart:
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