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I am too small for this house
full of your father's memory,
too small to quell the grief
that lines the walls and fills
the gaps between the
floorboards.

And you have left me here
to settle in amongst the weight
of it.
:iconglory-be-project:

I have been staying at my boyfriend's father's house (who recently passed away) and my boyfriend decided to go stay somewhere else, leaving me here on my own. I am lonely and sad and I don't want to be alone but I am.
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MariaTala Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013
you might just be my favorite writer here.:heart:
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camelopardalisinblue Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:heart:

I'm so sorry.
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FuzzyHoser Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Well written; the emotion is very clear, but not at all overdone. It seems delicate, like the scenario, I'd imagine. :heart:
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BlueDiamondSnow Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ohmygosh! You are amazing! So good! So concise. So power-packed. Keep your chin up. This world needs your gift. :)
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TwilightPoetess Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
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Thank you so much--keep creating!
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dragon-fly-to-me Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013
...sigh...
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LadyLincoln Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:
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WinteroftheSoul Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013
If I could leap through this damn screen and hug you, I would.
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trembling-knees Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh, how I wish you could!
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WinteroftheSoul Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013
Dear t-k,

There may not be all that much I can do as squiggles on a screen, but for whatever I can, I'm at your service.

Do take care of yourself!

Love,
WinteroftheSoul
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