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The dreams leave
me with scars I can't see,
bruises that don't show,
wounds that can't heal.

I'm carrying ghosts around
in sentences and sleep.
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XVll-TheStar Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013
I often have dreams like this and I wonder why my mind has to torture me at night when I do it to myself so often during the day. Your work is inspiring. I'm glad I found you today. <3
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KissTheSunrise Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013
"wounds that can't heal." - Exactly. <3
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cality Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
A short piece, but one that carries a lot of impact. 

I feel like the first two lines would flow a bit better if it was 'The dreams leave me / with scars I can't see' (just a suggestion :aww:), but I really like the rest of the line breaks. Also, the last two lines are fantastic; very dream-like and surreal. :clap:
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JayDanjerCobain Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Just lovely
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